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15 July 2007 @ 04:04 am
[fic] Sungmin; Min/Everyone  
Title: Sungmin
Fandom: SuJu
Pairing: Sungmin/Everyone
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1235
Notes: This took me a month, and I'm still horribly unsatisfied. I can't think up a proper name for this, either. I'm sorry for my writers block. This was the best I could do at the moment.

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It was that brilliant feeling of floating through a life filled with love, happy and perfect, and even the feeling of the world crashing down on you, tragic but still beautiful, that he lived for.

His love for Eeteuk was innocent and bright, like cotton candy on a bright sunny day. It was the quiet love that he kept locked in his heart, but shone though his smile whenever their eyes happened to meet. It was as fleeting as those beautiful day, and attraction was quickly changed to a platonic love and he respected Eeteuk most of all.

The love he had for Hankyung was foreign and bright, like the accent that tinted his words as he spoke. His hair stood on end when their arms brushed and he found himself trying to find more reasons to be close by and he got the Chinese boy to try and teach him how to wrap his tongue around the sharper sounds of Mandarin. But as his lips fumbled the sounds and phrases, his love stuttered and faltered like his tongue, and turns to admiration of the older boys endurance.

With Ryeowook, everything was soft and comforting in the way hot chocolate slides down your throat and pools warm in your stomach on wintry days. Soft giggled melded into soft touches and soft touches into feather-light kisses, as silky pads of fingers ran like rain along bodies. But winter always melted into spring, and the two mutually found that they didn’t need anything other than friendship to be close to one another.

Kangin radiate likes the sun: bright, and warm, and full of life, and he feels like he could bask in that glow forever. The older boy smiles shine, and while not the loudest of their group, anyone close can feel the warmth and affection that seemed to pour out of him. He drinks that power in, and lets it fill him to the brim with that sunshine. But anyone in his presence could tell that Kangin only truly shone for one person, and just as easily see that the other only had eyes for him as well; he didn’t have a chance against the calming balance that Kangin craved, but it was nice to get lost in that brilliant warmth from time to time.

Heechul was demanding and fickle and it reminded him of fireworks. The older man had suddenly taken a liking to him, and he had little choice in the matter, not that he minded. It was exciting and new and it was nice to be the one who was coveted opposed to him being the one pining, to be the one being lead and touched and loved. But after the initial bang of it setting off, the bright explosions of colour and light, it was inevitable that it would fizzle before disappearing. He knew that Heechul would tire of him and move on, so he didn’t mind basking in the memory of bright flashes behind his closed eyes.

His time with Shindong was like fresh from the oven pumpkin pie; he was sweet and warm and the feeling filled and warmed him head to toe; lips were decadent against his own, sugar coated lips spilling kisses and promises. But there’s a reason gluttony is a sin; over indulgence never did anyone any good and it’s best to stop before you begin to feel sick. While their time together was over, there was always that lingering taste of sugar when their eyes met, bringing a smile to both friends faces at the memories.

Siwon always made him think of a brilliant movie star, painfully gorgeous and lovely, but even more unattainable. He always looks beautiful, even if he had just rolled out of bed and it was hard to stop the fluttering of his heart as he flashed a bright smile and looked straight into your eyes. His voice was silky smooth and words slipped sweetly from his lips, enchanting all who listened, which he found himself seeking out like a lovesick teenager. Even if he didn’t want to, everyone grows out of crushes on movie stars, because there was never really real love; you can only idolize someone for so long.

Donghae and Eunhyuk had sought him out and coaxed him like a snake to a charmer with seductive words and offers of something new and tantalizingly exotic; the two were passionate and surrounded him like a second set of skin, and he couldn’t help but let himself stop thinking as he let the two carry him away. But there was never another test to see if the unknown would be just as sweet and exciting the second time: wedged between the two was not a place he truly wanted to be, lest it caused rifts in their friendships, ties severed like threads of silk pulled taunt before they snap.

Kibum was quiet and soft, reminding him of the chair his father kept in his home office, all worn leather and familiar comfort; it was as though the younger boy slowly let his body be conformed to fit, letting him curl into the curve of his chest, the dip of his shoulder, arms coming around to hold him as if they were made to do just that. His voice was steady and smooth, covering him in the warmth of their words, letting lips sooth away worries like a balm for his soul. But despite the honest lull of whispered promises, none ever rang true in his eyes; Kibum’s eyes would only burn for curving smirks and proud movements of another and he thinks that the younger boy was the only one to ever truly break his heart.

With Yesung, he feels like he’s fallen down the rabbit hole, the world changing and swirling before his eyes, reality lost in a blur of colour and sensation; he’s distraught and drunk, heart still freshly shattered, and the older boy was far too willing to help him forget for a night. But when he woke the next morning, head swimming and pain radiating through his body, he feels startling even more lost than he had before.

He can’t help himself when Kyuhyun comes to try and pick up the pieces that are left behind, the feeling of someone holding you tight too sweet to resist. He lets the youngest leave a trail of fluttering kisses on exposed skin, lets the apologies spill off Kyuhyun’s lips, heating deep down to the marrow of his bones. He lets hands ghost across skin, everything so gentle and so very soft, exactly the opposite he wanted himself to be treated (rough and hard and raw, the way his heart seemed to feel), as if he meant the world to the youngest. He lets his tears fall as he sees stars behind his eyelids and presses his hand tight against his mouth to muffle out the name he knows he shouldn’t be screaming. It’s slow, drawn out, far too sweet, and by the end of the night he can hardly remember himself and Kyuhyun falls from his lips like a prayer. Waking up the next day, Kyuhyun still fast asleep beside him, arms slung tightly around Sungmin’s waist and mumbling out half formed sentences that end up promising him the world and more, he realized that perhaps he needed all of his past experiences to lead him to this point.

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prettyovernight on July 15th, 2007 08:26 am (UTC)
"the way hot chocolate slides down your throat and pools warm in your stomach on wintry days."

best. imagery. EVER.
♥♥♥
터미네이터 토끼: {kangin} tastejaded_skys on July 15th, 2007 05:41 pm (UTC)
Now, I wish I could find someone that kisses me and makes me feel that simile~~ XD

Thank you very much! ♥~
shienri on July 15th, 2007 08:59 am (UTC)
OMG. That was just. so. so... so... beautiful. ;______;

My heart hurts for SungMin but it's always nice to know that KyuHyun will help him pick up the pieces. I envy fanfiction for this... ;____;



Love you Umma~!
터미네이터 토끼: {kangin} tastejaded_skys on July 15th, 2007 05:44 pm (UTC)
*snuggles* Thank you very much, sweetie~~!

Don't worry! Min's happy in the end! Because Kyumin is what I love!

♥♥♥♥~~!

Love you too~!
otokos on July 15th, 2007 10:39 am (UTC)
I really enjoyed reading this.

wow. <3
터미네이터 토끼: {kangin} tastejaded_skys on July 15th, 2007 05:44 pm (UTC)
Thank you! <33!
keysmashing my way into history!chuchama on July 15th, 2007 11:42 am (UTC)
You have wonderful imagery and I feel so bad for Sungmin because of it. But the ending made me happy, because Kyuhyun was there to help Sungmin pull himself back together and in the end, maybe Kyuhyun will be the one right for Sungmin. (Hopefully so; it seems he's run out of bandmembers to fall in love with, otherwise.)

<3333
터미네이터 토끼: {kangin} tastejaded_skys on July 15th, 2007 05:46 pm (UTC)
Hahahahaha~! It always the last place you look, isn't it? I'm terribly fond of Kyumin, so I'm picturing him stickin' with the kid.

Thank you very much~~!
K.virginangelic on July 15th, 2007 12:19 pm (UTC)
I enjoyed this tremendously. I LOVE the imageries you threw like fireworks and chocolates. I loved the ending because it was both a beautiful start and end. I'm not making sense but just know that I love this.

And maybe because I'm a Kyumin fan
터미네이터 토끼: {kangin} tastejaded_skys on July 15th, 2007 06:41 pm (UTC)
No worries~~ I get what you're saying. Thank you very much~!!

I'm such a Kyumin fan too XD
Nhiavirjin on July 15th, 2007 04:26 pm (UTC)
This has really good description. ^^ I like it... But... feelings for every one of his groupmates!? Wow, Haha. ^^ Well, at least Sungmin's in the right place now. Good job. The details are just like.. whoa.
터미네이터 토끼: {kangin} tastejaded_skys on July 15th, 2007 06:42 pm (UTC)
C'mon, though! If you were in a 13 male group, wouldn't you have a little crush on everyone to begin with?? XD

Thank you~~!
catnip1613catnip1613 on July 15th, 2007 04:31 pm (UTC)
So good! Great imagery and overall a wonderful piece. You really captured all the boys characters very well. *hugs* Awesome job!
터미네이터 토끼: {kangin} tastejaded_skys on July 15th, 2007 06:49 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much!
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터미네이터 토끼: {kangin} tastejaded_skys on July 15th, 2007 06:48 pm (UTC)
But there's gotta be some pain, or else it's far too unreal! Love doesn't glide through our lives so simply. It's beautiful and sweet, but it's gotta hurt sometimes.

I love you moar, you know. ♥

i know what it's like to focus on behind your eyes. Ok, good, I'm not the only one who does that.

Oh, sarahpie ♥~ ilu~~~!
this_hyukjaethis_hyukjae on July 15th, 2007 05:33 pm (UTC)
SungMin's such a slu.t I LOVE IT!
LOL I'm kidding. SungMin could never be anything but cute and adorable and cuddly and warm. I adored this fic. Great job!
터미네이터 토끼: {kangin} tastejaded_skys on July 15th, 2007 06:48 pm (UTC)
Naw~ Minnie's just got a tendency to fall in and out of love~ Most were just crushes, more were never vocalized to the person in question.

Thank you very much~
ryou_no_baka: Maxryou_no_baka on July 15th, 2007 05:38 pm (UTC)
I think it's really amazing how you wrote this...
So bitter sweet and so different with every person Sungmin loves... It gives him a bit of a whorish air but in the same time he's so innocent and sweet....
Good job, really!
터미네이터 토끼: {kangin} tastejaded_skys on July 15th, 2007 06:54 pm (UTC)
Naw, he was mostly just crushin' on the other boys opposed to sleeping with them or even being romantically connected.

Thank you very much!
희님의 꽃잎heechul on July 15th, 2007 05:57 pm (UTC)
title: sungmin

lol yeah not a proper title but it's okay, i forgive you 8D only because of the shindong lips and i /just/ watched that card kissing game last night and it makes me giggle.

also because i love your description of kangin. he is just like that and for some reason, i don't think many people focus on that part of him <33 and heechul like fireworks is brilliant but it makes me sad :( i hate things that fade. shiwon is realistic, which is funny based on his description <3

kibum agh

but kyuhyun <333

i loved it <33 and i can't possibly see whore sungmin or slut sungmin in this because it seems like he was just looking for kyuhyun the whole time <3
터미네이터 토끼: {kangin} tastejaded_skys on July 15th, 2007 06:53 pm (UTC)
Hahahahaha! It was that or "Min's Got A Problem With Finding His Bandmates Hot." Any suggestions??

I think it's because he's my favorite, but Kangin's just such a bright person, it seems so infectious! Gah! I'm sorry the Rella part made you sad. I'll try writing a Heechul-centric fic to make up for it (oh god who do I pair?! Help~)

BUMMIE ONLY WANT HOT PRINCESS LOVIN'. WHO COULD BLAME HIM? XD

Thank you~!! I really wasn't trying for whoretastic!Min, so I'm relieved you didn't get that vibe~~!

♥♥♥♥♥
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{{ a y a m e | mabudachi trio }}hoyah on July 15th, 2007 06:03 pm (UTC)
this is a very touching idea, of how you can't meet your perfect love and get it all right the first time around. i think my only criticism (aside from a few forgotten punctuation here and there) is that you used the word "bright" to describe three different relationships and i kind of felt like all of these should be different. at the same time, though, 12 other boys is a lot to work with. and you did a stupendous job. n.n
터미네이터 토끼: {kangin} tastejaded_skys on July 15th, 2007 06:39 pm (UTC)
Aw, thanks. That's the whole feeling I was hoping to ge across!

Blah, that's kinda why I'm unhappy with this piece.... I'll probably re-write some parts of it, or at least, some of the adjective. I feel like I used all forms of "warm" waaay too much. Could you point out the puctuation mistakes? I'd like to fix those right away.

♥~~~~
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Rinfirepixie620 on July 15th, 2007 06:12 pm (UTC)
I really liked how you wrote a Sungmin x Everyone fic without making Sungmin look like a slut. I was a little worrie when I saw the pairing but decided to read it anyways. Good thing I did because I really like your fic. I think you did a great job all together.
터미네이터 토끼: {kangin} tastejaded_skys on July 15th, 2007 06:55 pm (UTC)
I tried hard to make him not seem like a slut, so that's a big compliment! Thank you~
revvvolution_xrevvvolution_x on July 15th, 2007 07:16 pm (UTC)
KYU WINS ALL.

This was written incredibly well. It's gorgeous.

I so love you. =D
터미네이터 토끼: {kangin} tastejaded_skys on July 15th, 2007 07:39 pm (UTC)
I do love that kid~~

Thank you very much! ♥
Asher: SuJu - Sungmin cutewindsorcerer on July 15th, 2007 07:16 pm (UTC)
Wonderful, talented imagery! So well written. Loved every bit of it!
터미네이터 토끼: {kangin} tastejaded_skys on July 15th, 2007 07:51 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much!