December 19th, 2005


He got that ambitioin baby, look in his eyes...

So creative writing is like my favorite class in the world. And amidst our short story unit, we wrote a lovely thing called a personal narrative. Quite entertaining. I had a lot of fun, but it was a bit difficult to write because of the emotions attached to it. BUT anywayz, I'm posting it here, and I would absolutely love to have some feedback on it - whether it be good or bad. I hold this piece very close to my heart, and nothing would make me happier than receiving some solid concrit or even a bit of praise . . . or even just an overall opinion of the subject matter. Whatev.

Title: Bruised

Author: Ashley Robinson

Rating: MA [mentions of drug abuse]

Word count:  1,897

Summary: ‘We were friends; some of the best you might find, and all it took was one summer to knit us together, ever so tightly. It takes more than a broken promise to sacrifice love.

A/N – I swear to god I’m sane. This story might make you think otherwise, though.


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