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24 December 2006 @ 01:32 am
First Times (1/2) Jack/Ianto 15  
Title: First Times
Author: _stolendreams_ 
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Rating: 15? maybe. I'm no good at the ratings thing
Spoilers: Everything up to Out of Time. If it's been aired it's fair game in this fic.
Summary: A series of first times, from Jack's point of view (and no, I don't mean that sort of first time... well not just that sort)
Disclaimer: Not mine, not making any money from it.
Authors Notes: Having a really bad night, but this just came into my head and so has been written and edited and re-written while I await a really important phone call which looks like it won't come until the morning now. I still have no beta for my torchwood fics *looks hopeful* any offer will be gratefully accepted especially if you happen to speak Welsh so that Ianto can say something in dialogue rather than just in description.

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kephkephisos on December 24th, 2006 02:46 pm (UTC)
Wow. I love the format, and the emotions, and how the relationship develops. Gorgeous.
_stolendreams_ on December 24th, 2006 03:25 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you liked the format, I wasn't sure if I'd be able to pull it off.
kephkephisos on December 24th, 2006 04:59 pm (UTC)
You pulled it off beautifully. :) And add my voice to those wanting a sequel, please.
_stolendreams_ on December 24th, 2006 09:32 pm (UTC)
Request noted.
I'm starting to worry that if I don't write a sequel I'm going to be in deep trouble.
If my brains still working after tomorrow then I'll give it a go.
kephkephisos on December 25th, 2006 09:43 am (UTC)
Don't be pressurised into doing it, only write it if you want to, sweetheart. You've made me feel guilty now. oo;;
_stolendreams_ on December 25th, 2006 02:17 pm (UTC)
lol. sorry. I want to. I just need to get through today and tomorrow without the overload of family 'quality time' killing off all my brain cells.
DarthHelloKittydarthhellokitty on December 25th, 2006 02:05 am (UTC)
I *really* like this - for some reason step-by-step stories like this really appeal to me.
Campaspecs_whitewolf on December 25th, 2006 09:38 pm (UTC)
You've used such a beautiful prose with this piece, it's rather calming and peaceful almost to read, as if in the remembering of their coming together all else around them is dulled; there is no danger, just the memory of Ianto and himself and how they grow closer step by step. Very nice piece, I'd simply adore seeing more of it :)

CS WhiteWolf
Sianbellasianna on December 29th, 2006 09:38 pm (UTC)
Oh this is just lovely... really sweet and tender. Very nicely written too. Well done. I Look forward to reading more ofyour fics :)
welshhelenwelshhelen on January 11th, 2007 11:47 am (UTC)
Lovely, lovely fic. I'm catching up with all the Torchwood fic out there - I didn't check before because I didn't want to be spoiled :-)

By the way, Welsh is my first language and I'm a south-Walian as well, though from much further west than Ianto. If you (or anyone else!) wants to get in touch for some Welsh words/phrases, then please do :-)
_stolendreams_ on January 12th, 2007 05:20 am (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it. Enjoy catching up on all the Torchwood fic, there's some great writing out there.

Oh, thank you for the offer, I may just take you up on that at some point. :-)
funwithpeyote on February 13th, 2007 03:50 am (UTC)
Wow, I really love this: it's like you've taken the most poignant, memorable snippets of their growing relationship and brought them forward for the audience to see. Concise, well-written, and it flows beautifully. I'm keeping tabs on you now ;]