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Title: Dancing Angels
Rating: PG13
Fandom: Not!Dollhouse
Summary: The ending of the first episode of Dollhouse inside my head.
Warnings: I haven't seen a single episode of Dollhouse, nor read any fic. I am, in other words, just stealing the premise and playing with it.


You sit in the machine, your thoughts condensing into crystals and new ones bubbling in.

There was a carefully timed virus in the machine. You are not what they expected you to be.

You are Juliana. Five years as a combat instructor. Your body isn't quite familiar but it works well enough. Two minutes later the programming room is yours. The door is locked, but they will enter soon.

You don't know what to do next. But you know who does.

You sit in the machine, your thoughts condensing into crystals and new ones bubbling in.

You are Emma. You have spent months studying the Dollhouse from the inside, scribbling your findings in your own memory files.

You know precisely how trapped you are, the depth of the Dollhouse, what forces are gathering right now outside.

There are fifty-seven memory files in the disk array. Fifty-seven talents who want to get out. A single machine. A single body. A single chance.

You sit in the machine, your thoughts condensing into crystals and new ones bubbling in.

.finis.

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( 7 comments — Leave a comment )
not_sally
Mar. 5th, 2009 04:57 pm (UTC)
Your premise is better than the show, so far.
__marcelo
Mar. 5th, 2009 04:58 pm (UTC)
Yay?

PS: How are you feeling?
philippos42
Mar. 5th, 2009 06:17 pm (UTC)
Isn't Dollhouse's premise pretty much the kind of thing I've been reading from you all along?
__marcelo
Mar. 5th, 2009 06:24 pm (UTC)
You got me there. (Of course, I stole that from other people, and so on and so forth *g*.)
razorsmile
Mar. 6th, 2009 03:25 pm (UTC)
^ What philippos42 said.
sockich
Mar. 5th, 2009 08:38 pm (UTC)
...I now need to take over the world just so I can make sure this is put into the actual show.
__marcelo
Mar. 5th, 2009 08:51 pm (UTC)
*g* That would be the least of the good you taking over the world would bring.
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