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Beta request. And it's for porn! (sorta)

The good things: It's porn(ish), it's Babs/Tim, and it's short (~740 words).

The bad things: It's my first porn(ish) fic, and I'm acutely aware of how easy it is to do this not only wrong or *wrong*, but *wrong in a bad way*. So, what I'm asking for is not only technical betaeing about, you know, character, language, plot, etc (though I need that too); I could really use somebody willing to tell me "Nonono and also no" at the whole idea. Really. Although I think this fic is quite mild by the standards around here, it's a bit of a jump for me, and I'm not confident at all about posting it.

Help?

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marici
Feb. 4th, 2005 03:29 am (UTC)
I have time, if you've forgiven me for the bad crack a couple posts ago:
sunlitmarici@gmail.com
__marcelo
Feb. 4th, 2005 03:40 am (UTC)
Forgiven? The "J'onn's wife" fic is right on my list of "things I'll try to write -and hopefully not mangle too much- sometime soon"! :)

The fic's on its way. *Heaps Of Thanks*
sageness
Feb. 4th, 2005 04:05 am (UTC)
I have a bit of time, too, if you want an additional opinion. Email sageness at livejournal dot com. :)
__marcelo
Feb. 4th, 2005 11:43 am (UTC)
On its way. Thanks a lot!
brown_betty
Feb. 4th, 2005 04:06 am (UTC)
Is this your bunny, my bunny, or some third bunny? I'm thrilled no matter which!
__marcelo
Feb. 4th, 2005 11:46 am (UTC)
It's definitely *your* bunny. Mutated, twisted and mangled, I'm afraid to say. I'm just hoping it'll improve the chances of pornier people taking the bunny, 'cause it certainly deserves that :).
brown_betty
Feb. 4th, 2005 03:22 pm (UTC)
Well, I await eagerly to see what you've done with it.
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