__marcelo (__marcelo) wrote,
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Beta request. And it's for porn! (sorta)

The good things: It's porn(ish), it's Babs/Tim, and it's short (~740 words).

The bad things: It's my first porn(ish) fic, and I'm acutely aware of how easy it is to do this not only wrong or *wrong*, but *wrong in a bad way*. So, what I'm asking for is not only technical betaeing about, you know, character, language, plot, etc (though I need that too); I could really use somebody willing to tell me "Nonono and also no" at the whole idea. Really. Although I think this fic is quite mild by the standards around here, it's a bit of a jump for me, and I'm not confident at all about posting it.

Help?
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