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Jul. 11th, 2008

  • 11:04 AM
Walter/Daniel Kiss
Title: Candy
Author: Raffi
Genre: Shounen ai
Characters/Pairings: Minato Arisato / Bebe
Chapters: 1 [ complete ]
Rating: PG - 16
Summary: They were standing like this without a single word for few minutes, when finally, the elder boy spoke in quiet voice, as if whispering to himself: ‘…Candy.’
Warnings: boys love ahead~
Length: ~ 700 words.
Notes: I own my soul to my dear beta-reader~ 

xX - Candy – Xx 

 

‘What do you think, Minato-sama?’ A young man with foreign accent turned around to face his friend, ‘It looks nice, doesn’t it?’

Minato, finally getting a chance to leave his sewing machine, shot a short glance over at the man who was calling him. He mumbled something like ‘mhm’ and returned to his work. He was very busy; he was nearly done with sewing something he worked on over a month almost non-stop.

‘Minato-samaaa! Take a look at zis!’ Bebe got impatient and a little hurt from being ignored lately.

‘Okay-o- … kay…?’ Eyes flashing open, jaw dropping down on the floor, he just stared.

‘W-what iz it?’ Bebe looked away, feeling a bit embarrassed and shy when being looked at so bluntly.

The sun was setting down; the whole room was colored gold. The gold illumination did not leave Bebe out of its glow; his entire body seemed tanned. The shadows dropping down on his fragile frame were only emphasizing every curve of his body. Those blonde locks, as if reflecting the light, seemed even brighter than before. Those crystal blue eyes, which were shyly staring at the floor now, looked like angels’. The cherry pink kimono with sakura blossoms he was wearing suited him better than it would any other woman.

Finally regaining his ability to move, Minato stood up and rushed to the door out of the classroom. As he was about to open the door, he felt his sleeve was being pulled, preventing him from going any further.

‘Minato-sama, what’s wrong?’

They were standing like this without a single word for few minutes, when finally, the elder boy spoke in quiet voice, as if whispering to himself: ‘…Candy.’

Bebe leaned closer in order to hear what his friend was saying: ‘What waz that?’

‘You look like candy.’ As the final word escaped Minato’s lips, he grabbed Bebe’s hand and brusquely pulled him close; their noses almost touching. He had no intention to give Bebe a single chance to speak, so before any questions might be asked, he pressed his lips against the younger man’s. They tasted so sweet, like bubblegum; sugary to the maximum, making your teeth ache.

To his surprise, he had no need to force his way in, in few short moments Bebe joined this wild dance, performed by their tongues. Minato’s eyes grew open when he felt Bebe’s delicate fingers roaming down his chest and, without losing their way, stopping their journey right beneath his belt. Stroking the sensitive part of his body lightly, then increasing the caress, then going back to light and gentle touching again making Minato groan.     

Without even realizing it, they bumped into the desk and without any second thoughts; Minato pushed his lover on to it, so that he could take the full control. Bebe was now helpless and all he could do was give in; there was no point it holding back. 

When Minato’s hand snuck under his kimono and in incredibly short time removed any obstacles preventing him to reach the desired goal, Bebe ended the kiss and took a deep look into his eyes. They both were blushing fiercely, breathing in as much air as they could.

‘Don’t give me that look, Bebe. It makes me feel like I’m a rapist.’ 

‘Aren’t you?’ Lying down on his back, getting a hold of Minato’s waist with both his legs, he pulled him close, so that his blue-haired lover’s chest was resting on his, thus making both of them gasp when their erections met.

‘So be it.’ Minato agreed to take up that role and licked Bebe’s collar bone, while his hand grabbed his beloved transfer student’s manhood and stroked it roughly. ‘You know what I’m gonna do next, don’t you?’ The reply he gained was sweet moans beneath him, as he increased his caressing pace.

With a trembling voice Bebe murmured: ‘Eat me?’

Minato grinned, before kissing him again.

Indeed.

 

-End


Comments

[info]hisoka_arisato wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2008 08:32 am (UTC)
wow *__* I wonde how one of your JIN/Minato fic would turn out if you could have made me swoon over Bebe...
[info]raffi__ wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2008 08:37 am (UTC)
Hehehe, thanx~ ♥ I'm working on 3 different fics right now, so they all influence each other, aargggh-! MinaJin, MinaHidetoshi AND my 7th chapter of teh love triangle %_% *brain explossssiiion*
[info]hisoka_arisato wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2008 08:45 am (UTC)
OWH! >.< YOU SOUND BUSY *HUGGLES*
[info]raffi__ wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2008 08:47 am (UTC)
*huggles* BTW, when will *you* update your fic, mhmmm?
[info]hisoka_arisato wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2008 09:12 am (UTC)
next tuesday most likely >.< School has me swamped >.
[info]raffi__ wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2008 09:46 am (UTC)
School in July?! 0_0
[info]hisoka_arisato wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2008 11:01 am (UTC)
you must not know this but I have school till October! No summer vakay!
[info]raffi__ wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2008 04:53 pm (UTC)
0________0 WTF? When do you have vacation then?
[info]hisoka_arisato wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2008 04:54 am (UTC)
November and Disember then when January rolls in we'll be going to school for 8 months non stop..
[info]raffi__ wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2008 09:42 am (UTC)
0_______0 OMG. That is so totally unfair!
[info]hisoka_arisato wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2008 10:25 am (UTC)
your telling me1 We don't have summer or spring break either!
[info]micodeavi wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2008 08:43 am (UTC)
I never knew I'd like MinaBebe but this fic is real nice *__*
The part when Minato suddenly said 'you look like candy' is soo cute XDD

oh, and good luck on your other 3 fics!! X3
[info]raffi__ wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2008 08:46 am (UTC)
*hugs Mico* Thank you for the support~ ♥

Glad you liked it!
[info]lienoym wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2008 09:17 am (UTC)
Bebe is just asking for it.

...
...

He is, y'know. :3

I really liked this! It was funny, and sweet :)

did I hear something about jin/minato because i heard those words being spoken - perhaps it is just my otp calling to me :)
[info]raffi__ wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2008 09:46 am (UTC)
Thank you~

And yes, I *am* working on Mina/Jin fic right now, so be sure to read it then~ ;D
[info]kitsune_prophet wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2008 02:12 pm (UTC)
That was both... adorable and hideously hilarious. I laughed, even though I shouldn't have.

LOL.

Hahah, I didn't expect that at all. I expected something fluffy cute. Well, actually, I -did- get that, just with a little bit of extra flavor for an after-taste.

Much. Glee.
[info]raffi__ wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2008 04:56 pm (UTC)
Well, yeah.. umm.. I did not expect it would come down to this ending ^^; BTW, that Tanaka/Mina prompt, I decided to draw this one =D
[info]kitsune_prophet wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2008 05:04 pm (UTC)
Hahahah, well, it was surprising, but not unwelcome. <3

And I look forward to Tanaka. He makes me lol. The only pedo that makes me lol.

MINATO MAKES YOU PEDO.
[info]raffi__ wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2008 09:44 am (UTC)
Yeah, I already got a plan and a scatch of what would be on the picture XD
[info]calliopepurple wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2008 03:50 pm (UTC)
I don't like Bebe that much, but you make this yummy.
[info]raffi__ wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2008 05:01 pm (UTC)
To tell you the truth, I dont feel much love for Bebe, either ^^; But, heck, it was a prompt ^_^
[info]kittyriku wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2008 03:17 am (UTC)
Um.

Hot, plz. DD: <3333 And what a nice pairing to boot. <3
[info]raffi__ wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2008 09:45 am (UTC)
<3333 Thank yooou Kitty~
[info]kittyriku wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2008 03:51 pm (UTC)
You're welcome~ :D
[info]emo_precipitate wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2008 04:16 am (UTC)
I still think it's cute.

And you don't really have to give me your soul, darlin'.
[info]raffi__ wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2008 09:47 am (UTC)
Thank you~

But what if I want to?
[info]emo_precipitate wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2008 06:20 pm (UTC)
Hun, why would you want to do such a thing?
[info]raffi__ wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2008 07:29 pm (UTC)
Plain and simple really! :D You are amazing and I love you! <3 I really do, if I had a chance I would totally love to meet you in LIFE *_*
[info]emo_precipitate wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2008 07:37 pm (UTC)
I love you too, hun! ♥ One day, when I'm older and if you don't forget me, I'll visit. I promise.
[info]raffi__ wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2008 07:54 pm (UTC)
We should come up with the plaaaaaaaan! ♥ No, we MUST! Sometimes I really wish I had lots and lots of money... TT_TT

And dont you ever EVER say that I'll forget you!
[info]emo_precipitate wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2008 08:06 pm (UTC)
Maybe we can meet at the halfway point. Like...France~! ♥ Yes, we can meet in Paris, France. Whenever I make enough money for that. Haha.

Yes, ma'am~
[info]raffi__ wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2008 08:07 pm (UTC)
:D Alrighty~ Now I know WHY should I save money! *hugs* ♥
[info]emo_precipitate wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2008 08:15 pm (UTC)
Hehe. ♥ You know, hun, seeing as I'm only fourteen and can't get a job yet, it'll be a while before I can make it there. You sure you wanna wait that long? You could be married then~~~~~~~~~~~
[info]raffi__ wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2008 08:27 pm (UTC)
And sooooo? *_* I am gonna get married next year, regardless! I still wanna meet you very very much!
[info]emo_precipitate wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2008 08:30 pm (UTC)
Ooh, what's the lucky person's name? ♥ But, like, you'll be having a family, and I don't wanna like, interrupt that. It'll be like, odd. Aaand. FOUR YEARS IS A LONG TIME.
[info]raffi__ wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2008 08:38 pm (UTC)
LONG TIME FOR WHUT??! Maybe it'll happen sooner, y'know? I'm 19, I OUGHT to find the job soon~

You wont interrupt a thing actually~ Who knows, maybe I'll get there with a little tummy ^-^ (yes, I mean baby)

Well, his name is Kiril ^^ (You *do* know my name, do you?)
[info]emo_precipitate wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2008 08:48 pm (UTC)
It'll take me significantly longer to save money, though, you know? So it'll be a while before I get there~

Aww~! That'll be so cute. And yes, I do know your name~
[info]raffi__ wrote:
Jul. 13th, 2008 11:07 am (UTC)
Who knows, maybe I'll drop by sometime in teh future~ Never been to States ^^
[info]emo_precipitate wrote:
Jul. 13th, 2008 08:35 pm (UTC)
That'd be so fun! ♥
[info]friendofdeath1 wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2008 03:35 pm (UTC)
That was really cute~. And funny as well. :D
[info]raffi__ wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2008 07:25 pm (UTC)
^^ Thank you~
[info]liotsuki wrote:
Jul. 13th, 2008 02:00 am (UTC)
I've never thought of the whole Minato/Bebe pairing but dude...that was awesome. And adorable. ♥
[info]raffi__ wrote:
Jul. 13th, 2008 11:09 am (UTC)
♥ Thank you~
[info]lienoym wrote:
Jul. 14th, 2008 11:41 am (UTC)
Not to sound like i'm pimping my own stories on your own story (D:), but I read through one of your comments that said you've never read a JinxMinato story...

I'd just like to let you know that if you want to read one, you can find it on my writing journal :) No linkage, all you have to do is go to my userinfo x3

Also, I have a question (so this comment isn't specifically pimping out my stuff xD): Are you planning or have you done a story on the park guy? I can't remember his name right now, but he's the guy who talks about the pink alligator :3 I've read a total of one story on that, and it was angsty :(

*begs for mercy* Please don't kill me, I have lots of chocolate. Nice, soothing drug-laced chocolate.
[info]raffi__ wrote:
Jul. 14th, 2008 01:41 pm (UTC)
So in other words: you want me to write one for you? :D If so, then it is no prob~ Never wrote one about him~

And why should I kill you? 0_0

*goes off to read the story*