Bloodied Up ([info]_matriculated) wrote,

The Clinic (One Shot)

Title: The Clinic (One Shot)
Author: [info]_matriculated
Pairing: Gerard Way / Matt Skiba (Alkaline Trio)
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Out of the shadows emerges a figure, limping its way towards them in tattered and bloodied clothing. It doesn't seem to notice them at first, but when it does, its face changes almost immediately, its eyes filled with hunger and rage.
Warnings: Gore. Murdering of a zombie like creature.
Author Notes: This little one shot came about when I was bored and making some graphics, which you can see in the post. The end results were kind of grindhouse-y, so I decided to write them as characters sort of within the Planet Terror universe.




They roam the deserted halls quietly, cautiously, communicating with nothing but hand gestures and the occasional nod as they check room after empty room. The only light source for the place is natural, the sun beaming in dirty and broken out windows, illuminating the dust dancing in the musty stagnant air.

They round a corner, the taller of the two peering down the hall, taking a few steps before stooping down, twisting his head to the side before stretching his arm, stopping the younger man in his tracks.

They still. They listen. They wait.

For a few tense moments, nothing can be heard but the sound of the wind softly rattling debris stuck in a sill off to the side. The older man lowers his arm, ready to let the younger proceed until he hears a distant shuffle. He quickly raises the shotgun he's been cradling in his hand, aiming it with infallible precision straight down the hall as the shuffling gets closer.

Out of the shadows emerges a figure, limping its way towards them in tattered and bloodied clothing. It doesn't seem to notice them at first, but when it does, its face changes almost immediately, its eyes filled with hunger and rage.

The older man doesn't seem too worried though, when he sees that there is only one and it's pretty slow although it's trying it's best to hobble its way towards them, decaying fingers outstretched, its mouth flexing and teeth gnawing as it moans and drools.

He lowers his weapon before addressing his companion.

"Hey kid."

He looks over at the uniformed young man, nodding his head in the direction of the approaching creature.

"Batter up."

The younger grins before turning on his heel, taking a slow running start before charging at the creature, holding his baseball bat firm and at the ready. The older man watches and grins when he hears the familiar ping and sickening crack as the metal connects with the creatures jaw, hard enough to send it flying back a foot or two.

The older takes his time walking down the hall to where the younger now is, unleashing a flurry of brutal blows to the creature.

When he's close enough, he stares down at it as the younger takes a step back, leaning over a bit to catch his breath. The creature gurgles and jerks, laying there seizing until the older man pulls a pistol from his back pocket, pressing the barrel to its head. The uniformed young man plugs his ears as the older pulls the trigger.

They stand there silently for a few moments, still staring down at the creature before the younger speaks up.

"Why didn't you just do that in the first place?"

The older man shrugs, placing the smaller gun into his back pocket before hoisting the shotgun over his shoulder, taking a few steps forward to walk on before actually answering, as if its nothing and without looking back.

"I like watching you do that. S'kinda hot."

The older man smirks to himself, unseen by the younger who blushes, his tiny teeth tug at the corner of his bottom lip before he finds himself grinning and answering with a simple, "Oh." And that's all he has to say about that, before he jogs to catch up with the taller mans long strides.

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Anonymous

January 22 2012, 19:03:53 UTC 4 months ago

The graphics are great, but a tip on writing: using epithets (the older man, the taller man, etc.) is a really, really bad form of writing and turns a lot of people off. You can never go wrong just using their names and it wouldn't take anything away from the story.

[info]_matriculated

January 22 2012, 19:07:59 UTC 4 months ago

In this story, they don't have names for a reason. There is a huge idea for this in my head but this is just a tiny piece of it. I honestly don't think I'll ever get around to writing out a full chaptered version of my vision but I just wanted to share this little ficlet.

[info]_matriculated

January 22 2012, 19:16:08 UTC 4 months ago

Also I'm turning off anon because I don't see any reason why anyone would feel the need to say this as anon and I'd like to know who is reading, especially if they feel compelled enough to comment. :]

[info]ehroobeeah

January 23 2012, 02:13:59 UTC 4 months ago

I disagree with Anonymous, epithets do not signal bad writing, if used carefully, thoughtfully, and/or sparingly. I mean no one would accuse Jack London's "To Build a Fire" as an example of bad writing. `

Anyway, Matriculated, considering you know how to string a complex sentence and handled the tension pretty well, I'm sure you know what you are doing by keeping your characters nameless. I am very intrigued about how this pair will interact and experience this Planet Terror Verse, and can only wish you'll write more. At least another ficlet? :]

Oh, and in paragraph 11, first sentence, I'm sure you meant baseball bat, right? (^-^ Haha, it was quite a funny image visualizing Gerard K.O-ing a zombie-thing with a metal baseball.)





[info]_matriculated

January 23 2012, 06:34:34 UTC 4 months ago

Thanks for your input and thanks for reading. Haha, also, thank you for catching that mistake, it's fixed now. :]

[info]innocent_wolves

February 2 2012, 20:49:21 UTC 3 months ago

Oh man. I read this days ago and really liked it, but I never got around to commenting so I bookmarked the story but then I forgot, and THEN I happened to stumble across it on tumblr so here I am!

Okay, so can I just say that I adore this pairing? Ohmygod. I have honestly never thought about it before and now I can't see why ever not, BUT I am feelin' it. I love this pairing. I want more of these two <3

I am also going to disagree with anon because there's obviously a point to why you're leaving their names out. It's not bad writing if it's done right, which I think you've accomplished. And in this case I personally think it adds to the effect, rather than distract from it or whatever.

I would love to read more though! I'm really enjoying this Dealer/Student thing (the graphics are great, btw) and I'm curious about the Planet Terror verse, so I hope you change your mind about writing a chaptered story :)

[info]slaughtermatic

March 23 2012, 04:55:03 UTC 2 months ago

So idk what this is or who you are, (I think I found my way here through ontd lol idek), but I felt like I had to say something because those graphics, man? They get me legit EXCITED. Like they're a cover of the most amazing comic ever, and this snippet blows my mind because I can just see it, and the grimy, saturated feel of it and just. If you never write on it again the idea itself is fucking amazing, I'm already dead.

[info]_matriculated

March 24 2012, 04:21:27 UTC 2 months ago

Oh wow. Thank you so much for reading.
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