Lindz's Creative journal ([info]_creativedreams) wrote,
@ 2003-08-27 15:28:00
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Current mood: bouncy

Short drabble.

Time ticks by it seems like forever ago that you made your last wish on the falling star and the dream you last dreamt was the last dream you would have, As your arms grasp around the body laying next to to, feeling there heart beat through the clutch of your hand, as you wait for the final hours to dawn upon you. You think of your life and how it has turned out, your first steps, your first words, the way your mother used to cradle you to sleep whenever you were scared of the dark dreams which filled your head, your first day of high school when you felt so smaller than the other kids and you just wanted to go home, your first love, your first kiss, your last prom night, now it all seemed such a dream, laying here wishing for a miracle to happen your body clutched against your love in life, as you wait for the final seconds to come tears brim in your eyes, but you don't cry you only pray for them to stop and go back to your life which you lived all them years, but you know it's not going to be like that, not no more you whisper to the loved one "...I love you.", And then it ends.




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[info]glazeddonut2186
2003-08-27 01:05 pm UTC (link)
Again with the masterpiece! Wow, this one really got to me for some reason...I'm not sure. I just know that this is really great. You should consider a profession in poetry, for real.

Keep this up!

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[info]_creativedreams
2003-08-27 01:08 pm UTC (link)
Yeah, I really like this one for some reason it came right from the heart, I just started writing, thanks Zach it's really good to know i'm doing well! ^_^

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