"The sleep of Reason brings forth monsters."

This is part of my fall_for_sx piece that I wanna run by the flist as a test. It's pretty raw, but is this teaser-y and interesting enough to warrant a whole fic? Or another multiple parter?

Previous bits here: "Awakenings"

( The_Art_Of_Staying )

Whaddaya think? Should I go on, or just start something new?