Introduction to Dumbassery

I let my friend Lillian read some of my writing and she didn't like it. In the same words that I used to explain it to Alexis:

Rolling14reader: why? [in relation to "Why Lillian does not like my writing"]
Pear the Dork: I guess she thinks it doesn't make sense.
Pear the Dork: And it doesn't, so I'll give her that.
Pear the Dork: I tend to write scenes more than stories and the main goal is atmosphere, not plot exactly.
Pear the Dork: I tried writing poetry but .. I cried.
Pear the Dork: I cried .. because it was bad. :)
Rolling14reader: oh wow
Rolling14reader: bad what you wrote or bad writing
Pear the Dork: Bad writing. X'D


Although I probably won't post poems anyway (because I haven't written a decent poem since 4th grade) -- I must admit that my prose sucks also. Don't say I didn't warn you.

Because I did, haha.