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Inconceivable

Recital
Grace sure can clean. We met years ago and somehow she always knows when I'm in desperate need of her help. Her scarred hands scrub away the messes I leave behind, her weatherbeaten face glowing in spite of the work. I've never been much of a housekeeper and realized a long time ago I'm much better off if someone else is in charge of that aspect of my life.

I'll never forget her first visit. We had spoken in passing a few times, but it took me a good bit of time before I plucked up the courage to ask her to come over and lend me a hand. She came highly recommended by numerous friends and relatives, so I finally swallowed my pride and gave her a call.

She burst through my door like a tornado, immediately finding the clutter I'd attempted to shove into closets.

"I'm sorry about the mess," I feebly apologized, hands curled into tension filled fists.

"That's why I'm here," she said briskly as she worked. "Everybody's got somewhere they hide their junk. I find it in every house I clean. Some people learn their lesson and just leave it out until I get there. The stubborn ones keep trying to hide it. I say 'You know I'm coming. Why do you make so much work for me?' They still do it."

"I forgot half of that stuff was there, to be honest."

"Don't you worry about it. I'm good at my job."

When she was finally finished, I tried to pay her. I know she'd agreed to clean the place up a bit for free, but she was a miracle worker and I felt the need to give her something in return for her labors.

"No," she waved my money away with a laugh, "honey, you can't afford me."

And with that, she was gone.

It took me a while to get used to this "new" home Grace had made for me. I spent a lot of time wandering through the rooms, waiting to wake up and realize the mess returned. It didn't. The change was inconceivable to me then, and I'm still in awe of how free I feel living here now.

I'm still messy and in need of Grace. She always makes time for me, though I'm not sure how or why.

I tell all of my friends about how amazing Grace truly is. I can pass along her number if you need it.

You'll never be the same.

 Shine Your Light On Us by Robbie Seay Band from Give Yourself Away (Bonus Track Version) (Rating: 0)

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marstokyo
Nov. 21st, 2011 07:41 pm (UTC)
She doesn't live near Baltimore does she?
whipchick
Nov. 21st, 2011 10:08 pm (UTC)
I also have an AMAZING housekeeper, and I do pay her, but there is still so much love and care in her work!
myrna_bird
Nov. 21st, 2011 11:52 pm (UTC)
She sound like a miracle-worker. Maybe she's an angel. Neat story!
etimodnar
Nov. 21st, 2011 11:56 pm (UTC)
wow, I like it. I like it a lot!
____hejira
Nov. 22nd, 2011 01:48 am (UTC)
I'm so glad you got my feeble attempt at an allegory. Whew. I was worried that many seem to think I have a maid who comes to clean my actual apartment for free. Lol. Thanks for reading.
jacq22
Nov. 22nd, 2011 02:41 am (UTC)
Real or fiction I could sure use Grace.

I just don't get to clean high or low stuff, and windows well! I do clean floors wash, iron and cook thought.

Great story.
____hejira
Nov. 22nd, 2011 02:54 am (UTC)
The answer is it is both. This was my attempt at an allegory. I didn't want to put at the top though **symbolism below** but I might have to. Lol. A lot of people seem to think a maid is cleaning my house for free. :)
noodledays
Nov. 22nd, 2011 02:51 am (UTC)
awww, I love the persona you've given us here - really heartwarming. :D
everywordiwrite
Nov. 22nd, 2011 10:36 am (UTC)
Just to reassure you some more - I definitely got the allegory! :-)
unmowngrass
Nov. 22nd, 2011 03:44 pm (UTC)
This is really well written, and I can see it clearly. then again, I saw your other entry and knew it was an allegory going in, and I knew what you were allegoralising(?) to as well. Thoroughly inconcievable! Is it completely obvious what that is ~and~ how it relates to the topic without that? Maybe not. Is it well written in its own right? Absolutely! Well done!!
muchtooarrogant
Nov. 22nd, 2011 04:13 pm (UTC)
My wife and I love the cleaning service we use as well. Fun entry.

Dan
xreesex
Nov. 23rd, 2011 06:11 pm (UTC)
I wish I had a house keeper! Our house is... not the neatest haha.
sweeny_todd
Nov. 27th, 2011 01:52 am (UTC)
I read this and felt happy *thumbs up*
fourzoas
Nov. 27th, 2011 07:42 pm (UTC)
Grace can be quite amazing, indeed!
weaseldance
Nov. 28th, 2011 06:46 pm (UTC)
I love this!!
karmasoup
Dec. 1st, 2011 09:29 pm (UTC)
I totally need my own Grace!
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